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A Sixth House scrawling
05-11-2006, 01:40 AM,
#1
A Sixth House scrawling
I felt like writing a poem that one of House Dagoth would write. (If I wrote this in the state I was in about 40 minutes ago, it would be almost incomprehensible.)

Quote:THE FIRES OF REBIRTH
CLEANSE US, FREE US
WHILE THE REST SUFFER
DEPRIVATION

THE LORD SEES THE LIGHT
AT THE END OF THE PATH
AND AT THE BEGINNING

THE PILLARS THRICE CRAFTED
BY UNTRUTHS
TEAR THEM DOWN

AND LET ANOTHER STAND
AS A TESTAMENT
TO THE FABRICATED DELUSIONS

WHERE THE LORD REIGNS:
THE CRADLE OF THE MOUNTAIN
AND THAT OF THE WORLD

COME TO UR-TOWER AS A SERVANT,
A FRIEND, AN ALLY
OR BE CAST DOWN WITH THE DUST

I actually think it needs to be "fixed" to appear to make less sense. And I also want to put some secret message in it.
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05-11-2006, 02:13 AM,
#2
 
that's pretty good...
remember, not all 6th House is crazy-ash-folk... I mean many are regular people... many did not get corprus, and many that did are not really House Dagoth members... and many 6th House are underground...
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05-11-2006, 02:39 AM,
#3
 
Well, there's no reason not to have scrawlings left behind by the corprus beasts that we know from TES3.

Quote:We are ourselves and one
In receiving, in Flesh, and
in devotion

The dream, that which
Is proceeded by the
Gift of Flesh, from which

One eye sees Mundus
The other sees timeless ideas
And another shines Magus

And to these things
We devote ourselves to
And to the Father

(Is it "Magus" or "Magnus"? So many games use either of these names and it is extremely easy to get them mixed up.)
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05-11-2006, 05:45 AM,
#4
 
Pretty nice, but shouldn't the first one be "while the rest suffer" rather than "while the rest suffers?"
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05-11-2006, 08:23 PM,
#5
 
You DO realize I have to get myself into a sort of trance-like state to write things like this, right? How the hell am I supposed to pay that much attention? Tongue
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05-11-2006, 08:58 PM,
#6
 
go lick an ash statue for more trance, and more cryptic poems

Tongue

:explained: <----- This smiley is not cool.
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