In honor of

[InsanitySorrow]

Thats actually not too bad, you need to equilize your voice with the music so that you can hear your voice properly, you seem a bit drowned out from the music.

I am guessing you used just a guitar there, sounds like an acoustic one. Anyway with a good singer this could be a good song.

[IAMTHEEMPEROR]

I think he sounded nice. Just touch it up a bit and it's really good.

[DarkAsmodeous]

You gots me to write something else ^^


Have you heard the news? A Texan mother died
A thousand died in Burma, and another million cried
The media’s self centered, geared for fear and not for life
They won’t give you any hope, only decadence and strife
The nation’s gone insane, I say the government’s to blame
I think our conscience died with the towers and the plane
Worse than all their lies is this country’s cowardice
When’d you sell your soul for your ignorant bliss?

Teachers, doctors, students and preachers, standing in the road
The masks they wear obscure the features, like tears atop the snow
Every God and chief and church and thief, just collecting what he’s owed
We need our soldiers, champions, brave crusaders, to strike the final blow
Despite our fear, we’re cavalier, even though history has shown
For every tear that finds an ear, a thousand more lie;
wasted on the snow

You march and chant with fingers clutching signs
You leave it to the politicians, a product of the times
You petition all the congressman, scream and beg them to comply,
And gape at the audacity of those who wonder why
It’s not enough, the soldiers fighting in the war
we want peace, we want peace, order in some more
A necessary casualty, for the love we will achieve
It’s the evil ones that killed him, fire as you grieve

Teachers, doctors, students and preachers, standing in the road
The masks they wear obscure the features, like death atop the snow
Every God and chief and church and thief, just collecting what he’s owed
We need our soldiers, champions, brave crusaders, to strike the final blow
Despite our fear, we’re cavalier, even though history has shown
For every fear that finds an ear, a thousand more lie;
Bleeding on the snow

[Mormacil]

Very good Can't fully agree but nice stuff

[IAMTHEEMPEROR]

It sounds nice. Pretty much what Mormacil said.

[llamaranger]

love it. dibs on the musical adaptation (unless ride the wind beats me to it ). Its perfect for a nice acoustic number Don't really know iof you had music in mind but this is probably the best piece of poetry I've read in years.

[RideWithTheWind]

Very good, I like it as well (I must say I don't understand everything, my english teacher was too pretty so I dreamt during her class instead of listenig). But no way for me to turn it into a song, or at least in my style of songs. But it's maybe way better like that I mean, for your ears.

[DarkAsmodeous]

Have at it llama! (I retain all rights, of course )