Claim: Ebb08 - Hlavora Faryon's Shack (Claimed)

[SACarrow]

Don't forget version 2.01 of the ST ESM itself.

Steve

[Sanpicture]

The second update of the main esm you mean? If so, I've downloaded that one also when it was released.

Bye,

Sanpicture

[TheImperialDragon]

Originally posted by SACarrow
Oops, that would be a mistake. Have you upgraded your setup to use the private assets? I just did the 2.0 upgrade myself and while there were a couple of issues with Sparrow's shack, absence of texes was not among them.

Did you repair it yet? If so, could you send it to sandor?

[SACarrow]

I haven't yet submitted an ESP for review, but when I do, those issues will have been fixed.

Steve

EDIT: To clarify, I don't think the problems were related to the shack stuff, but rather to my attempts to do lists with ST ingredients that have been altered in 2.0.

[Sanpicture]

Hi!

I've finished the shack and it's ready for reviewing.

About the texures: they don't show up in the cs, but when I playtest the interior they're all there. I don't know who made these wall textures, but he/she really did a wonderful job!

I've attached the esp.

Bye,

Sanpicture

[SACarrow]

Just wondering: was this ESP done with V1.2 of the CS? I tried to open it in my version and well it wouldn't.

Steve

EDIT: Thanks Sandor for the conversion.

[sandor]

I attached the converted version.

[Sanpicture]

So...? Is it finished, or do I need to improve a few things? ?(

Bye,

Sanpicture

[TheImperialDragon]

Originally posted by Sanpicture
So...? Is it finished, or do I need to improve a few things? ?(

Bye,

Sanpicture

No, it is not reviewed yet. Sandor attached the file with the SI-dependancies removed. I'm reviewing it, I missed this post earlier. I'll review it immediately.

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Sorry for the delay.

I got a few errors while loading in the CS first time with ESM 2_03, but after swapping to ESM 2_04, they went away. hrug: I assume you used ESM 2_04?

INTERIOR:

- Light the place with lanterns, not a fire pit. This interior corresponds to one of the dock shacks, there is no ground to support the firepit. (it needed to be bled into the ground more anyway...)
- Consider adding a shack support piece to cover up that seam.
- Floating ledger book (screenshot)
- Floating bench (screenshot)
- Floating painting (screenshot)

ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE:

- Looks like it will work. However, I suggest specifying a location (inside the cell) for the book reading package

DIALOGUE:

- Add topics via the result script. (AddTopic [TopicID])
- I personally would change the "Yeah," in StSPEbbedinSwamps to "Yes," but it's your call.
- DIAL contaminations should be removed very carefully (Keep a backup from before doing this). Note that there is also a contamination for the STAMSol0401ReichParkeep topic.

[SACarrow]

Just my 2 cents on the firepit: my rationale for using it on plank floors is that a layer of dirt was added after the stones were set to protect the floor. You just can't see the dirt.

I would scale down the fire a little; that size looks like it would threaten the wood of the frame.

Also my suggestion for a lower-class informal affirmative would be "aye".

Later,
Steve