[Completed] Bodrum, BR-011, Turns Her Tail Shack

[bob196045]

This claim has been completed by Eurahbus 1/9/09

Please see general info on Bodrum

General Information on Bodrum


Turns Her Tail is another Fisher, she also helps Sharab and Wind to keep the resturant stocked, occasionally when the fishing is good and the stock is high, she will head up river to other villages to sell the seafood and share the money with the other 2

Her home should be decored poorly a place to sleep and other necessary items are all that is needed


to claim BR-011, please reply to this post


Enjoy
Bob

[Sluijs_br]

I'll claim it. what's the building? a shack? and do I create the npc?

[bob196045]

All yours


Yes it is a shack


Theirs a SS here: Bodrum General Information

which shows the claims


You do not need to create an NPC for this claim the NPC is allready in the Master


Enjoy
Bob

[Sluijs_br]

I guess this one's so simple that it's nearly done. I'll send a screenshot as soon as I take it.



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and there the ss is. (I still need to place the door)

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EDIT: placing the esp. file now. I already cleaned it with TESAME. the cell name is "Claim BR-011"

[bob196045]

Howdy


It needs more stuff, even for a "poor" shack. this is too little.

I would recommend at least 65 objects

Also everything is floating, all of it needs to be "F" keyed


Enjoy
Bob

[Sluijs_br]

I'll place more. about the flying objects: it seems that I accidently moved the shack before saving.



edit: I've cluttered the shack.

[bob196045]

Ok


Well its good that you added more clutter, but honestly. their are so many placement errors I can even begin to start.

Keep in mind the NPC in this claim is a fisherman, their is not even a hint of fishing related items in your submittal

I have a sample for your review, (the cell is named "bobs sample" the sample does not necessarily reflect the shack of a fisherman, it is more for you to see what types of clutter and how they are placed you would find these in a shack for most

When I say "poor" or "poorly" I am speaking of the decor which is "Plain"

your objects will typically be "de_p" or "ex_p" objects not "de_r"


Also remember we are not in a hurry, take your time


Enjoy
Bob

[Sluijs_br]

alright. but I don't think I have placed de_r/com_r items

[bob196045]

Howdy

I'm not saying you did place any of those items I am just clarifying what I mean by poor

The actual objects is not my concern its the placement of those objects

=)

Enjoy

Bob

[Sluijs_br]

well, I've removed the firepit and some items I tought were strange in the enviroment. I added another fishing pole (on the ground) and more barrles with crab meat (one is on the top of the orignal one, and the others are where the firepit was)