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In honor of - DarkAsmodeous - 08-11-2007
As some of you may know, I'm in a bit of a Lain mood right now (I know its an understatement), and I've been listening to too much darkside of the moon, so I wrote some poetry more lyricaly styled than normaly in honor of a sort of mixture of the anime, and the ending of the PSX media experience.
I open my eyes
Shut off from the sky
By curtains, black as night
I lie in my bed
The thoughts in my head
Find something?s not quite right
There?s something about this family
There something that?s left unsaid
There?s something here I don?t believe
Is it real or just in my head?
I stare at the screen
Who knows where I?ve been
A me that is not myself
I wander the void
But I cannot avoid
The truth about life itself
There?s something about this fallacy
There?s something that?s never said
There?s something here to do with me
Is it real or just in my head?
I press to my head
Of metal and lead
A way to escape the lies
Memories I deem
That I?ve never been
And for Lain that no one cries
There?s nothing about this entity
There?s nothing I ever said
It?s time for some Madeline tea
Am I real or just in your head?
- Tlo1048 - 08-11-2007
Beautiful! :goodjob:
Bravado! :applause:
- IAMTHEEMPEROR - 08-12-2007
That is a beautiful work of art, and I think you hit it all spot on :yes:
- TheImperialDragon - 08-12-2007
This is very well done if I might say so myself.
- DarkAsmodeous - 08-12-2007
Wow, didn't expect that strong of a response, thanks a lot guys =)
- IAMTHEEMPEROR - 08-12-2007
I like poetry, when it's good at least. Can't write it though, guess I don't have an artistic soul
- cruxvader - 08-17-2007
You're just emblematic =)
- RideWithTheWind - 11-14-2007
I love it! Sounds, structure, meaning, everything is excellent! It gave me inspiration to compose a song! I'm pretty happy with the result (except that since my girlfriend left I have no singer right now so I have to sing myself... But I'm not a singer. And with my french accent I let you imagine the result... I'll spare your ears!).
It's just for amateur purpose, I play it in my bedroom so no worry.
I don't know if you wrote it with music in mind, but it seems so. You really should keep up good stuff like this!
- DarkAsmodeous - 11-15-2007
Haha, why thank you.Perhaps you'd like to post this song?
- RideWithTheWind - 11-15-2007
Ok then, but you have been warned
Consider the voice as a placeholder, I know someone who sings much better. Your lyrics, her voice and my music, that will be great I'm sure.
Read the lyrics while listening because I don't articulate (it hides my accent) and you won't understand your words
So here it is : http://media.putfile.com/Madeline-tea
If someone wants to sing it here is the same without voice at all : http://media.putfile.com/compo12
I really love that song, I can't wait to have it sung properly!