A draft for the main story

[Razorwing]

Originally posted by Quentin Fortune
I stand corrected and my apologies to Razorwing. Excellent work

Greetings

Quentin

I actually thought Valderon lived in the building, sort-of the hardworking master administrator who can't tear himself from the office at the end of the day. But I'm glad he'll walk home from work in OST.

[noremorse]

If he walks home, I hope we can arrange an Guardian escort.

[AJkiller23]

Hello. The summary above is quite nice... however, I do have a little problem with it. It mentions the inclusion of a new building called "The Emissary of the Dunmer". I can see what you are getting at; however, the word used here (emissary) is not used in the correct manner. An emissary is a person, someone who would be a courier to another nation (note the similarity to the word "missive"). Since the word is being used for a building, it is not entirely appropriate. Instead, a very correct word to use would be "Embassy", which is actually a building in another country for visiting politicians to stay at. Embassy would be exactly what you had in mind.

Sorry to be a bother.

[noremorse]

Not a bother at all! Welcome to the Silgrad Tower forums! Nice to have you here. Thanks for noticing this mistake aswell. Embassy is a much more proper word for this, but it doesn't really sound right, lorewise. It could just be me though.

Here are some words that we could use:
Delegation
Commission
Embassy
Foreign Office

I think "The Commission of the Dunmer" or "The Dunmer Delegation" would be the best choice.

[Razorwing]

Originally posted by AJkiller23
Hello. The summary above is quite nice... however, I do have a little problem with it. It mentions the inclusion of a new building called "The Emissary of the Dunmer". I can see what you are getting at; however, the word used here (emissary) is not used in the correct manner. An emissary is a person, someone who would be a courier to another nation (note the similarity to the word "missive"). Since the word is being used for a building, it is not entirely appropriate. Instead, a very correct word to use would be "Embassy", which is actually a building in another country for visiting politicians to stay at. Embassy would be exactly what you had in mind.

Sorry to be a bother.

Hi and welcome, have a fishy stick.

No bother I called it the "Emissary of the Dunmer" building; not in the definitive variety you referred to, "The Emissary of the Dunmer". I tried to imply that the people inside it were emissaries.

As Morrowind and Cyrodiil are more like states than nations, I didn't feel Embassy was an appropriate word.