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08-11-2007, 04:10 AM,
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As some of you may know, I'm in a bit of a Lain mood right now (I know its an understatement), and I've been listening to too much darkside of the moon, so I wrote some poetry more lyricaly styled than normaly in honor of a sort of mixture of the anime, and the ending of the PSX media experience.
I open my eyes Shut off from the sky By curtains, black as night I lie in my bed The thoughts in my head Find something?s not quite right There?s something about this family There something that?s left unsaid There?s something here I don?t believe Is it real or just in my head? I stare at the screen Who knows where I?ve been A me that is not myself I wander the void But I cannot avoid The truth about life itself There?s something about this fallacy There?s something that?s never said There?s something here to do with me Is it real or just in my head? I press to my head Of metal and lead A way to escape the lies Memories I deem That I?ve never been And for Lain that no one cries There?s nothing about this entity There?s nothing I ever said It?s time for some Madeline tea Am I real or just in your head?
The soul's condition is learning to fly
Condition grounded, but determined to try Can't keep my eyes from the circling skies Toung-tied and twisted, just an Earth-bound misfit, I |
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08-11-2007, 04:38 AM,
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Beautiful! :goodjob:
Bravado! :applause:
Royal Argonian Shaman - Deputy Leader! hahahaha
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08-12-2007, 05:15 AM,
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That is a beautiful work of art, and I think you hit it all spot on :yes:
Lol what?
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08-12-2007, 05:21 AM,
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This is very well done if I might say so myself.
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08-12-2007, 05:56 AM,
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Wow, didn't expect that strong of a response, thanks a lot guys =)
The soul's condition is learning to fly
Condition grounded, but determined to try Can't keep my eyes from the circling skies Toung-tied and twisted, just an Earth-bound misfit, I |
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08-12-2007, 07:16 AM,
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I like poetry, when it's good at least. Can't write it though, guess I don't have an artistic soul
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08-17-2007, 02:35 PM,
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You're just emblematic =)
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11-14-2007, 08:57 PM,
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I love it! Sounds, structure, meaning, everything is excellent! It gave me inspiration to compose a song! I'm pretty happy with the result (except that since my girlfriend left I have no singer right now so I have to sing myself... But I'm not a singer. And with my french accent I let you imagine the result... I'll spare your ears!).
It's just for amateur purpose, I play it in my bedroom so no worry. I don't know if you wrote it with music in mind, but it seems so. You really should keep up good stuff like this! |
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11-15-2007, 06:36 AM,
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 Haha, why thank you.Perhaps you'd like to post this song?
The soul's condition is learning to fly
Condition grounded, but determined to try Can't keep my eyes from the circling skies Toung-tied and twisted, just an Earth-bound misfit, I |
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11-15-2007, 10:54 AM,
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Ok then, but you have been warned
Consider the voice as a placeholder, I know someone who sings much better. Your lyrics, her voice and my music, that will be great I'm sure. Read the lyrics while listening because I don't articulate (it hides my accent) and you won't understand your words So here it is : http://media.putfile.com/Madeline-tea If someone wants to sing it here is the same without voice at all : http://media.putfile.com/compo12 I really love that song, I can't wait to have it sung properly! |
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